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Thursday, April 16, 2020

Writing Term 2

Hey,
Welcome back to my blog today I am going to be talking to you about my reading.
As you know we have been put in lock down.
But school started up again.
For writing  this  week we have taken a paragraph from our report and have taken words from and changed them.And have used the right punctuation for them.

The green is were the words have been change and there is better punctuation in it.

How is your online learning?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Dylan
    I like your writing about Jonah and like how you have used better words. I am also learning at the moment. have you ever seen Jonah play? Who is your favourite player this Year?

    Steve

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