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Monday, June 26, 2017

Silent writing story Rugby.

At school after lunch we write for about 10 to 15 minutes and here is some of my writing:




All I can see is the ground and boots ‘get ready’
Sweat all around.
The mud felt cold and wet.
People were talking like mad.
Then the ball was like a rocket.
Then it was to get out of the scrum.
It was time to run.
People were running like a bolt of lighting.
I finally got the ball, I was nervous the ball felt cold wet and muddy.
Then I was on the ground like click of a finger.
Then the other team kick the ball it looked like It could go over building.
My team got the ball and ran the flash down the sideline.
Then say passed the ball to me someone tackled me like the hulk.
Then when I was in the tackle their were people all on top of me then I got kicked in the face.
The pain hurt it felt like someone kicking me over and over again.
Then it was half time I wasn't on for the first part.
Then I was on people were cheering because someone just scored.
1 minute remaining the score is 18 -18 and then the ball came to me. I went like mad in and out.
Then I could see the line. I jumped it felt like slow motion YES!!!!! I got I try.

By Dylan Thanks for reading.

3 comments:

  1. Love it keep it up

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  2. Great to see you have made good use of SUW time Dylan.

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  3. This is a really interesting story. By the way is this based on a true story?
    Remember to write a question at the end.

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