MY NARRATIVE!!!!

Hello,welcome back to my blog.
Today I will be showing you my narrative writing.We have been working on narrative with the theme being the future.I have really enjoyed making this.
I hope you enjoy

It was an early morning the sun was just peeking out. “RAY”! Get up his mum screamed “OK Im coming” Ray replied.As Ray slumped down the stairs he heard the news.Someone was making a spaceship that over 100 million people could live on,Ray couldn't believe his eyes “Mum look at this Ray yelled”.
“What” “Look at this” Ray with his mouth to the ground complaint sh  ock” “So should I be impressed”
Mum said like she didn't care” “well isn't cool” “Nah” Ray brother Tom said. “No one asked for your opinion” Ray replies ,well your both late for school Mum says.




When Ray arrived to school he sees his best friend Jacob,Rays sprints over and says “have you seen this space ship that over 100 million people can stay on” “like a holiday” Jacob says in confusing “No like to live”.
“ Why would you want to live in space” Jacob replied “think about it our world is a tip,sooner rather than later we won't be able to live here”. “But I like the world” “Yeah we all do but its ruined” Ray yells
“Woah lower your voice” “Sorry but the world is going to be uninhabitable soon”.The bell rings” Ray and Jacob arrived at their science class and sat down” “Good morning class” “My name is Mr More your substitute teacher for the day”
When the class began,Mr More showed everyone the new spaceship.
“So class what do you think”
The whole class looked shocked because one day they may be living on that ship.
After school when Ray arrived home he sat down on his bed dreaming of what it would be like to live in space.He started to get thinking of who had came up with the idea of living in space his name was Tim Adams,Tim Adams was a really good inventor who created the driverless car and the driverless plane.





1 month later
Tim Adams was almost finished with the space crafts but the people of the world were unsure of what would happen  to the world.
So Tim adams came out with a statement saying.
“We all know the world is uninhabitable so sooner rather than later we won't be able to live here so I have made the biggest and state of the art spaceships that can keep everyone safe.

2 DAYS LATER-----THAT NIGHT
“Ray get down here know!’ Ray mum shouted interrupting Ray listing to Tim adams statement. “Ok im coming” Ray slowly walked down the stairs. “Yes mum” Ray says “Were going to live in space”
For a second Ray couldn't believe what he was hearing “What?” “Were going to go live in space when the space ships are done” “Wait why can we still live on earth” Tom asks in counsfen “The earth is going to blow up stupied” Ray replies with anger. “Hey don't speak to your brother like that” Mum replies.



It was a cold wet night,Alarms started going outside. “QUICK GET UP” Mum yells “Whats happen Ray responds” its the earth its crumbling.Ray Tom and Mum sprint out of the house and get into the car.Police officers came up to the car and told them to get to the airport.
As they were driving they could see house collapsing all over the place and sky spacers smashing down.
When they got there the space ships were waiting “GET IN” people were screaming.They got inside there was so many people.
They were tolled to put on some hemlents that looked biker helmets.Everyone sat down it was silence.
Families looked terrified,You could see out the windows the world crumbling.



When we got into space everyone was still quiet you could people's hearts pumping out of there chests.
The facial expressions on everyone were upset and crying because some people didn't make it in time .

20 minutes go past and a woman comes out her name was Keria,Keria was ship's crew manager and she gave everyone a briefing of was what was happening,She said “I know that this is terrible but this is your new home,” she said.A man yelled out “WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN WITH EARTH” he yelled Keria respond with. “A special task force is going to go down rescue any survivors and make sure the earth is safe”
Keria said.
A woman yelled from the back of the crowd “my daughter is down there”
And a crowd of people started shouting about family being down there in the crumbled earth.
Tim Adams came out, “Hello everyone,” he said, “I know this is weird but let's take you on a tour,




The umugnous door unfolded to what looked like a shopping mall.
There were shops supermarkets,Hotels,Houses to buy.It was unbelievable.
As time went on and the tour ended Tim Adams said, “Sadly we have received news that the world is completely uninhabitable”
I could feel tears running down my face it felt like a river of tears.I could feel everyone sadness and everyone looked destroyed inside.The world that we loved has been destroyed and we cant go back.





5 Years later
It's been 5 years people are still upset but mostly over it.Its so different living in new lifestyle of being floating 100s and 100s  miles away from earth.spaceships are like countries and life was better than life on earth.It was really weird to think that we are living space
For a while because how different waking up and going to school taking space shuttles to school.Everything was so much different.We would sometimes pass the earth and the crumbling state that it was in.Mum got a job at the real estate me and Tom still go to school and Jacob sadly didn't make it to the space ship in time.